Friday, 3 April 2015

Final week to B school....



7 more days
The friends will finally meet
All in a frame
Worked into a frenzy
An excitement, none can beat
The chance to add that fiery brand
Long cherished and dear
The odyssey is the enlivener
Game for the fun filled year

A heavy billowed heart, 
Calling family a bye
The cheerful greet, The sweet embrace 
Repairs the melancholy
Crafts the relationship pie

Hand in Hand, we will march
And in chorus we will sing
The pledge to back each is the totempole
Apprehensions get a ding

A deal to keep the flame alive
To walk the sinuous wire
Few bottlenecks might exist 
But we will wade through the mire

The end beckons, 
And we cruise on
The resplendent orange flame bombards the sky
Signalling a new dawn....

This poem is shared with :
Poets United : Poetry Pantry#246
Wordle 205
The Tuesday Platform
Poetry Jam

45 comments:

  1. Feels like completed course, class, graduation...happy feelings and all life ahead! ~ So be it! ~ Thanks for visiting my blog :)x

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    1. Thanks for stopping by, Humbird! You have a lovely blog.

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  2. Good luck! Sounds like a wedding in the offing! k. (Manicddaily)

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    1. Thanks Mary! So glad, you stopped by.

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  4. All the best Susmit. Enjoy the world beckoning to you. Loved the way you've expressed your parting feelings... :-)

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    1. Thanks for your wishes, Maniparna! And those words of appreciation, coming from you, mean so much. It truly gives me the courage to keep on writing.

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  5. So be it...my best wishes :)

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    1. Thanks Sumana! So glad, as always, you stopped by.

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  6. Love the images of "billowed heart" and "flame...signalling a new dream." Beautiful.

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    1. Thanks Gemma! Nice to know, you liked it★

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  7. LOve how you make this so alive and full of energy, well done

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    1. Thanks for the kind words, Alan★

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  8. Very vivid and full of palpable energy..!! Beautifully executed!

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  9. I am only guessing but this sounds like perhaps graduation day, with all the excitement and emotion? I love that "new dawn" beckoning. It will be one of promise, I just know it.

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    1. You are quite close, it's time to hit the books again at B school. Thanks for your wishes, Sherry★

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  10. Good luck, keepers of the flame. I am sure the moments will be cherished all along :)

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    1. Let's hope so..Thanks for your wishes, Alok★

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    1. Thanks RK! Amazed, you stopped by...so happy★

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  12. As students there are many things we pledge to do. Future has other plans in mind.

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    1. That's so true, Future is really a rough business

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  13. Love the determination in this...to wade through the mire no matter what life may bring!!

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    1. Thanks CC! Glad, it touched you.

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  14. I like the idea of keeping the flame alive!

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  15. Lovely!! There is life in every breath …Cruise on...Good Luck, Susmit!!

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    1. Thanks for your wishes, Panchalidi.

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  16. What a battle school and learning can be...I loved the orange..it seemed to gently coat the whole poem

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    1. Yup, it is a battle without bloodshed. Orange is the colour, I'm hooked to. Glad, you liked it Jae★

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  17. This made me miss my school days...Well written! All the best for the new beginning! :)

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    1. Thanks for the nice words, Ankita★

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    1. Yes, in for the game. Thanks GL for stopping by★

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  19. Yeah Susmit.. keep the flame alive .. the bottlenecks will fade eventually ..:)
    All the Best :)

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    1. I'll surely try to do so. Thanks for your wishes, Kokila★

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  20. Ah, how wonderful to see education being likened to a brand being lit, Susmit. As William Butler Yeats remarks: "Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire."

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    1. That's such a wonderful quote, let me bookmark it. Thanks for the nice words, Nicholas★

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    1. Thanks Meenal! Glad, you felt that way.

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