Monday, 17 August 2015

Absence!



The wistful heart
Gloom whipstiched
Weeps for your absence

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19 comments:

  1. The essence of agony is there.

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  2. Absence is too hard to bear, sometimes! Nicely penned... :-)

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    1. Yups, gets unbearable. Getting those words of appreciation is always so motivating, Maniparna!

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  3. Gloom definitely can take over longing as you describe. Thanks. K.

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    1. Yes, it does, at times. Thanks for stopping by, Outlawyer!

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  4. Sometimes the absence of someone dear to us tears at the heart.. fills the soul with gloom.. as we hope to see them.. once again.. soon!
    Beautifully executed.

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    1. Thanks for those nice words, Sanaa! Glad, you stopped by.

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  5. Such melancholy...missing someone is one of the hardest things..

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    1. Yeah, it is tough. Thanks for stopping by, Susie!

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  6. Such melancholy...missing someone is one of the hardest things..

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    1. Thanks R.K...A pleasure to have you here!

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  8. Oh this is very beautiful - what a wonderfully fresh choice of words.

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    1. Thanks for stopping by, and for liking this Sherry!

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  9. beautiful.... and welcome back :)

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    1. Thanks Archana! It's always nice to have you here....Yeah, got stuck a bit.

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  10. Love the imagery of gloom whipstitching something.....so creatively written!!

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    1. So nice to have you here...Thanks C.C!

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